Spice up your drums man, I believe the repetitiveness the previous reviewer's referring to are the three drum loops with the minor break here and there.
Try producing a few separate drum loops then arranging them attractively. For example, in 4/4, you can produce drum loops A, B, and C, then arrange them in a bar as "A B A C", where C is a filler to the next bar. Plus if you're using FL I hope you know about changing the beats per bar in your step sequencer.. Just look left of the pattern name for the numeric toggle and adjust accordingly.
The melody is solid, but it doesn't follow any sense of time signature; I honestly can't tell what time signature you're in. Plus reusing the same synth with the same exact sequence in an entirely different key was a bit unnerving. As far as your synth and choice of layers I like how "clean" they are, and considering you wanted a professional approach the cleanliness of your production is fitting. Your equalization seems a bit off however.. Is your limiter extra-constrictive because of excessive peaks? It sounds like your low arp is gutted out, which is understandable because it would probably be the first to start peaking. I would layer that bass arp with an emulated guitar box to give it a quick fix, but that's just me.
Criticism aside, very clean, but a DJ would probably rip it apart before he used it. I do understand about impatience for uploading, considering I uploaded all of my music after a single render (that's not a good thing >.<).
Keep it up! You have much talent, especially at your age. Don't shun music theory!